Live and Uncensored: The Fowlmouth Trilogy. Official release!

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Yo all, it’s finally here! Live and Uncensored part I complete! Allow me to show my excitement by way of Bill and Ted persona: “This is MOST triumphant!”
Now, to the issue at hand:

Being his trilogy, this story is all about the underappreciated rooster. I mean, a story of this focus just HAD to be done. As far as I’ve seen, (and clue me in becuz I know Fanfiction.net has a hella-va lot of TTA fanfics too and I could have easily miss some) but only Pepe K’s ATTEPUH and a story called “Acme Acres County Fair” by Robert Chirico had the most solid usages of Fowlmouth. So, I felt a full-fledge focus was needed, and man, the results are satisfying. It’s set in a bit more serious tone, WB style and accuracy of course remaining intact, but the main issue being he is regressing into his old uncontrolled temperamental self.

Also, it wasn’t until I had to master Fowlmouth’s New York accent that I recognized that it’s really exactly like Bugs, And so, I try to maintain a difference by not slanging all his words out to an extent Bugs would. (I was hoping “Slanging” was a word for a sec there heh, heh (Bill and Ted: “Bogus”)) even though our favorite playboy bunny is not a player in this, he will be in my others. As far as a rating, gotta say PG-13 if to say anything, and that’s only because it is “Uncensored” in FM’s verbal case, but not to worry, it’s not Menace II Society or nothin, and you know that’s every other sentence! But, I guess that’s what makes it interesting right? Cursing in cartoons has been one of those things that makes sensitive viewers say “NO! He- he didn’t?!”And sometimes freakin’ leads to the creators canceling a show from a few complaints. (Just read up on the issues of Road Rovers) but F.M is really the only cartoon character who can really get away with it, I mean, he’s Fowlmouth. How couldn’t he? LoL

Most of the “Combiniction” factors that I mentioned in my intro won’t be seen until Part II. Given there aren’t even that many Fowlmouth pics to even grab to upload, I think this’ll be more for my fellow TTA artists to take a crack at, because man, does FM need some fan pics or what?! So I hope to get some help with the artwork, for imagination purposes of course. *Grin* (Babs, I’m definitely gonna talk to you about this, you’re amazing with it)

Reading on TTAfan itself is fine, but I’d suggest more-so to read original format version from word. Things like Italics don’t appear on-site, so I had to go through and use these [ ] as an indication that Fowlmouth was thinking this dialog. But, what would be missed is the italics of words characters put an emphasis on to describe something deeper to another, know what I mean? So, the choice is yours. I’ll be happy either way. *bigger grin*

And, that’s it. Hope it hits the Mailer soon. Also post comments, better yet right here on the forum page if ya like. I definitely want to hear what’cha think. Happy Holidays! Latas!

Fowlmouth (Promotion pic for Live and Uncensored)
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Don't read attachment here...

Yeah, It has some issues (meaning it has notes and spoiler ideas for other chapters, not good for the readers) but I messaged Squirrelly about getting rid of it. So, until then, just read off TTA itself, or get the attachment at the bottom of the story page because it is correct.

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Taken care of!

Taken care of!

Though just as a note to you and anyone else: You should be able to use the "Edit" button at the top of your own posts, and can edit the post itself, or and/remove attachments as in this case.

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Good job dude!

Good job dude! And please be sure to read the fic Squrriels. I know ya got drawing skills, and I'ma go back through and see what scenes are worthy of being visualized by an artist, maybe send a scene request and see if your, heh, up for the challenge? lol, it’s all in good fun. Thanks again, ya saved Christmas! ha, ha.

Uncontrollable 3 up next...

"So that's why they call them bouncers..."

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Final updates...

Final updates are in for Live and Uncensored, it's lookin' real good now, So re-up on it.

Main things enhanced were descriptions of scenery and clothes. There were a few missing words, (I hate when that happens) and other small edits.

Remember, I edited this story by myself, (usually I'd have another read it over) so if anyone sees anything else wrong just message me and I’ll take care of it. Read and review, and I’ll see’yas around in the new year!

"So that's why they call them bouncers..."