MY side of the story by EricDHound The next day in acmeloo brought a very big suprise.No one saw this coming but there it was.Walking down the halls of acmeloo was rodrick rat.All the students and teachers in the hall where in shock.He went to the office in fact.Every body was talking about it the rest of that day.Rodrick went in and asked to see bugsbunny.Bugs heared rodrick and went to see what he wanted.Now every one knows that bugs was no fan of rodricks.Walking up to rodrick bugs said hie famous tag line."Whats up doc?"Rodrick looked at bugs."I have come to thank you.For visiting my grand mother.You made her forget her pain.And maded her laugh."Bugs was ready for any tricks rodrick might have up his sleve.Some how bugs got the feeling that rodrick was on the level.Bugs relaxed a bit"Well your welcome.I am sorry about your grand mother."Heres the real suprise rodrick held out his hand to shake bugs hand.Bugs just staired at rodrick for a secound.Then he took rodrick hand.No tricks of any kind this time.After that rodrick said"I know that i am not well liked around here.Thats my fault and you and i.Will never be buddy buddy but.I am also here to call a trouce."Mean while rhubella had just gotten to acmeloo.Her eyes were all red,one could tell she had been crying last night.Walking down the hall she notched that some toons.Where looking at her with disaprovel in there eyes.Some students were whispering to each other as she walking by them.At that moment rodrick comes out of the office.Leaving a shocked and suprise bugsbunny behind.Rodrick finds himself face to with his now ex.Rhubella looked into rodrick eyes and saw saddness.They just stood there stairing at each other.Rhubella snaped herself of it.She spoke first and noticed that rodrick had been in a fight."You and wally got into another fight last night.After i left the park."Rodrick didn,t say any thing he just nodded yes."Well i have been thinking last night when a got home.Your right and you have a point.I am sorry rodrick.I made this pretty one sided.I gues i tryed to make you the villian in all this.And agian i am really sorry.But i am staying with wally because we have falling in love with each other.So please try to understand and i wish you well.You know rodrick there is some out there for you."Rodrick was standing there with his head down.Rhubella raised her voice a bit."Rodrick i know you can pull through this.You listen to me don,t you go off and do anything stupid."Rodrick raised his right hand for her to see.Rhubella did a wildtake that would done tex avery pround.For on rodricks hand was a good sized wedding band.Rodrick held his head up now and said in a low voice"I have been happy married for 5 and a half months now.We meet each other about a month after our breack up.She helped me get over my heart break.And things took off from there."Wally and some of the other toonters.Had now walked on to the sence.It was wally,babs ,buster ,plucky,shirley,fifi,hamtion and monty.Shirley walked up to rodrick ans said"Why didn,t you tell us about your grandmother?"Rodrick turned to shirley."Because some times i have trouble talking about my problems.And givin the way things where at the time.I don,t think any one would have belived me."Shirley thought about this and said"Good point."Buster was next to talk."I gues we forgot every body has feelings.Rodrick was about to say some thing.When a voice called "Rodrick there you are i have been looking for you.!!"Every body turned to see a toon mouse walking up to them.She was the same height as rodrick and had red hair,freckles.She has large cheast and a shapely body.She walked up to rodrick and put her arm around him.Rodrick could see every body mouth was apasp.Rodrick was smiling said"Every body this is my wife sheena."Rhubella thinking to her self."Yessh shes cute i hate to admit it.But it looks like roddy done alright for him self marrying her."Sheena looked around at them and said."You guys did a good job on tinytoons adventures.I just got in on dvd last week."Babs did a spin change into barba walters."Hey darling glad to meet you?How did you to meet roddy here?When was the wedding day?Where did you two go on your honymoon?And what did you guys do on your honymoo-Buster came up and put his handsover babs mouth."O.K.Babs that enough there rope it in."Sheena gigled a little bit.She wasn,t alone a good natured laugh went through the whole groupe.Plucky said"Well this is a day full of suprises.Fifi "Oy youz got thazt right.Every body looked over at monty "What i,m just as stunned as you all are.Buster was still thinking about what wally had told him about rodrick.About rodrick becoming a much better fighter.He decide he,d give that some more thought later."Sheena looked at rodrick and said."We better go or we will miss our plane."Rodrick and sheena started to leave.Rodrick stoped and held his hand out to wally.Wally wasn,t expecting this.Rodrick said "You know you and i will never be closse friends.But i don,t want to be enmies any more.So i supose a truce."Wally was a little caugtous about shaking rodricks hand.But he did and watched as rodrick and his wife left.Along with the other toons .They watched as rodricks limo drives off into the sunset.Rhubella looks into the cammera"Men!If i live to be 4oo years old.I,ll never understand men!!"Wally walks up to her and kisses her on the check."Hey it on the job training hon."Fade to black the end.
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Um....
Dude, have you ever heard of PUNCTUATION?
REPLY ERIC
Eric D Hound Sorry it has taken so long to reply.Dude i am working on that.I will get all the bugs worked out.I might have to use about 45 gallions of spectraide.
Looks like there is
Looks like there is punctuation, but looks like all the sentences have gotten run together (no spaces or line breaks). I was thinking it might just have been an html formatting issue and was going to fix it for him, but looks like that's the way he uploaded it.
Hey, Eric. Do you have an original copy with better formatting? I even looked at the one you PM'd to me, and appears to be the same formatting. If you do, we can fix it up, and maybe even combine the three parts into one post, or book.
If you have troubles uploading it yourself and keeping it formatted let me know and maybe I can have you email it to me, and I can try uploading it for you.
I am working on it.
Eric D Hound I am gonna bring in so help from my family.Don,t worry it will get a good make over.